interesting fruit..kinda terrifying...
Anyways. If you've noticed in the show, most fruits are either one or two syllables. We try to stick as close to the show as possible, so if you could shorten it that'd be great. Instead of being Yobidasu Yobidasu no Mi (which is a mouthful) it could be the Yobi Yobi no Mi, or the Dasu Dasu no Mi.
Also, if you could unbold your text that'd be great. Just the parts that you wrote, not the ones that're already there.