Kageyoshi

-for the love of god capitalize the beginnings of your sentences!
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 he is to young to truly understand romanticizes, but when he comes across a girl he like, whether he wants to or not.

sentence doesn't end

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some money. 

 This doesn't make any sense. Especially if the man knew it was a Devil's Fruit, it shouldn't have been "some money" Devil's Fruits sell for around 100,000,000 beli. 

-Tell more about his parents, why they kicked him out, why he wants them dead etc

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 use his ability's to steal.

besides the huge grammar mistake in this, explain how he used it. It doesn't make sense to just say "he used his ability to steal" 

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in-antiquate

should be spelled inadequate 

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 rich, old sword fighter

How did he steal from this guy so easily? 

-There's nothing in the history for his reasoning to be a ninja or developing his skills in kunai, shuriken or the sword. Nothing about the martial arts either. It is also to OP to have your OC "master" an ability like that when they first start out, plus he's only 13, so it makes zero sense for him to have a skill mastered already 

-there's also nothing of him finding his weapons beside the sword

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He uses Ninja wire

Ninja wire? There's also no mention of this in the history or skills

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he makes 3 of himself,

This doesn't make sense as he can only make 2 clones in the dormant level.  

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Sword, Kunai, Shuriken, Smoke bombs, Ninja wire, food, a climbing hook and a grappling hook

there's nothing of the smoke bombs, climbing hooks or grappling hooks in the history either. 

All in all, not a very well rounded character, just sayin :/

Fine, I suppose it is approvable now, despite the many grammar and spelling errors. Approved