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Gaffey



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PostSubject: Yobi Yobi No Mi    Yobi Yobi No Mi  EmptyFri Sep 27, 2013 3:47 pm

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Devil Fruit Name: Yobidasu Yobidasu No Mi
Translation: Summon Summon Fruit
Class: Paramecia
What the fruit does: Allows the user to summon grotesque creatures ranging from one to four depending on how high your skills are with the fruit. The summoner can even change the shape of the creatures when they have practiced hard enough with the power giving them large wings or saber teeth

Levels:
Dormant: Able to summon a single creature that is loyal to you and will fight for you.

Awakened: You can summon two creatures and even change small details on them like teeth claws and ect the person that ate the fruit will also begin to get beast like features on them like razor teeth and a taste for raw meat.

Adept: You can summon up to four creatures and make them have more larger details like wings height bulk and weapons on them such as tails that end with mace balls. The person that ate the fruit gets even more beast like growing tails and longer ears as there pupils become slits and they can no longer eat anything but raw meat.

Weaknesses: If summoning more than two creatures they start to fight with one another often killing each other off.


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Butterfly

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PostSubject: Re: Yobi Yobi No Mi    Yobi Yobi No Mi  EmptyFri Sep 27, 2013 8:55 pm

interesting fruit..kinda terrifying...

Anyways. If you've noticed in the show, most fruits are either one or two syllables. We try to stick as close to the show as possible, so if you could shorten it that'd be great. Instead of being Yobidasu Yobidasu no Mi (which is a mouthful) it could be the Yobi Yobi no Mi, or the Dasu Dasu no Mi. 

Also, if you could unbold your text that'd be great. Just the parts that you wrote, not the ones that're already there.

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PostSubject: Re: Yobi Yobi No Mi    Yobi Yobi No Mi  EmptySat Sep 28, 2013 1:23 pm

alright, approved

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