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Kou Getsu



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PostSubject: Frostmore Island   Frostmore Island EmptyWed Sep 11, 2013 6:00 pm

Name: Frostmore Island
Sea: Grand Line
Type: Winter Island
Size and appearance: Frostmore Island is a large island on the grand line there are no plant life except a small valley surrounded by moutains in the center where the frozen fruit that have been there for ages grow,  In the center of the vally is a ancient frozen lake that age is unknown to the life of the island in the lake are creatures of imagination and nightmares. The trees in the valley known as Frostmore trees are stained with frost and ice which gave them the name Frostmore trees.
Weather: Everyday it's snowing, hailing or sleeting.
Animals:
Frost Wolves:
Wolves that are larger and faster than normal wolves and have snow white fur.  
Frost Ravens: Ravens that are as large as a child with snow white feathers.
Frost Bears: Bears that tower over two fully grown men standing on each others shoulders, they have saber teeth and are smarter than the average bear, with fur of snow white.
Frost Boars: Boars that are actually quite small but can overwhelm in large packs.
Food: The fruit of the Frostmore trees and the frozen meat of the boars.
Vegetation: The only plant on the island is the native Frostmore tree in which there food is grown.
Population: There are fairly few that brave this frozen wasteland those who do are called The Frostmornians.
Owner: The Frostmornians
History: Frostmore Island was found by a young explorer looking for adventure and boy did he find it, he found the land of frostmore the wonders and dangers that were on this island excited him. As quick as he could sail he went back to the main land and found those willing to brave the Island of Frostmore, Those who went formed the first colony and set off to the land, as the years went by the first colony started to slowly die of cold,hunger and the creatures. One settler out of them all wondered something, if there were creatures on the island than there must be a food and water source for them to survive. So he set off with a rag tag group of friends and they werent seen for months to come, deprived of hope the remaining settlers decided to leave the island behind as they started moving onto the ship that brought them there. the single settler came back his clothes torn and him weakend. The other settlers brought him to the ship were he told them of the wonders he found. He than told them of the valley in the center of the island with all the trees, fruits and mysterious lake in the center full of strange creatures, the settlers first didn't believe him but they decided to take a look and what they foudn amazed them they instantly started picking the fruit of the Frostmore trees and started to re-settle on the island seeing new hope, they found out that the creatures of the island would die quickly if within contact of fire and that the Frostmore tree's didn't grow if far away from the valley. More colonies started to come of those willing and brave, now the island is the setting of a small town were the settlers now live and also Kou.


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PostSubject: Re: Frostmore Island   Frostmore Island EmptyWed Sep 11, 2013 6:58 pm

We would appreciate it if you would delete the text located next to the bold words, they are merely prompts. And if you could unbold your text (not the words like "history" but the text you wrote for it and so on). It just makes it a little difficult to read, thanks ^.^ 

Alright, onto concerns. 

1. Why are the creatures' furs and feathers made of frost? Fairly sure that's not possible.....it could be a similar substance to frost, but having frost fur would not actually keep an animal warm, in fact, it would probably freeze them to death. 

2. Why do the ravens have have talons and beaks made of ice? This, is also not possible. A beak made of ice wouldn't be able to open, and the bird would probably starve to death. Perhaps it is a substance similar to ice? 

3. I would just like to point out that you have used "there" in several places where it should actually be "their" this isn't a rule-breaker, more of a personal preference. It sorta bothers me when people get the "there's" mixed up.

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PostSubject: Re: Frostmore Island   Frostmore Island EmptyMon Sep 16, 2013 7:05 pm

Eep! Those are some tall ass mother f*cking bears! *runs and hides*

*speaks in a mouse voice* Approved! 

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