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Thadius M. Thatchett

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Name: Thadius M. Thatchett
Age: 26
Gender: male
Epithet: "Thatchett"
Place of Birth: An unnamed island in the east blue
Species: Human
Allegiance: Pirate
Crew: He used to be a part of an unnamed crew, until they broke up. Most of the crew were captured by the marines.
Bounty: 100,000,000
Role(s): Fighter / defender
Jolly Roger/ They flew a simple jolly roger, with the generic skull and crossbones.
Ship: They sailed on a small schooner, nothing too impressive.
Willpower: 20
Dream(s): His dream is to find the man responsible for the murder of his mother, father, sister, brother, and girlfriend.


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Character Appearance:
Height: 6'4
Weight: 195
Hair Color: Black, with a red streak ledin to the hair that covers his right eye.
Eye Color: Ocean blue.
Build: Lean, but toned muscle.
Tattoos/Piercings: Has plugs in both of his ears. He has a tattoo of a bird on the bottom of his neck, and has three stars in a line on the bottom of his right wrist. He has a fullmoon on the left side of his chest, and a sun on the right.
Other: He wears a long, black coat all the time. He prefers to wear black skinny jeans, but he also occasionally wears black sweatpants when training. He wears a black suit vest over a red dress shirt, with a black tie. He has three scars running from the top left side of his face to the bottom of the right side of his neck.

Character Personality: Kind, but stalwart and occasionally heartless. He is very reckless, and tends to jump into situations head first, looking at the details as he goes. Unfortunately, Thadius gets drunk very easily. When drunk, he is filled with rage and sorrow, because he is reliving the pain of seeing the trauma. Thanks to his rage, Thadius will attack anything he feels is attacking him or something he loves. He becomes increasingly reckless, and increasingly strong.

Likes: Soft things, cuddling, fighting, cute animals, tattoos, music, and the idea of love. He also adores flowers. He also likes to adventure.
Dislikes: Abuse of any ind directed towards anybody, pain, suffering, and ignorance.  
Goals: To kill the man who killed everything he loved.
Fears: Any form of arachnid. He also fears defeat.
Other: In romantic situations, he is awkward because he lost the love of his life. He likes to be around his friends, and is uncomfortable around strangers of any kind. He tenses up, and usually lashes out because of his fear of defeat.

Character's Background: As a child, Thadius had a desire to be the greatest pirate in the world, but lacked the drive to go out and achieve his goals. He often dreamed of running away to distant far off lands with his girlfriend, Kitty. His mother and father thought the best of him, but his brother and sister disproved his actions and mocked his goals. He loved music of all kinds, and even knew how to play a few instruments. Through everything, he always held onto the dream of conquering the grand line.

One day, when he was sixteen, he was walking in the forest with Kitty, when they stumbled upon a dying fox. He bent down, and looked at the foxes wounds. They had been inflicted by a creature much bigger than the fox. Being the adventurous kid he was, he set out to find the creature that had inflicted the wounds on the fox. Kitty stayed behind to care for the fox. Thadius eventually found the animal, and was terrified by what he had seen. the creature was a gigantic bear, but itwas scarred from years of fighting with other animals. Thadius knew that this would not be an easy fight. When the fight was won, Thadius was cut up and scrathed, but victorious. The creature had been guarding a fruit of some kind, and he knelt down and picked it up. Upon closer inspection, the fruit had a strange design on it, but looked tasty nonetheless. He ate the fruit in one bite, and immediately felt strange. It felt like every bone in his body was about to protrude from his skin. Suddenly, the bone in his forearm slid out from the top of his wrist. It was on this day that he realized that he had the ability to use and control his bones in any way he wanted. Additionally, he had the ability to fix any bone injuries that happened to him.

Years later, on his 19th birthday, the air became increasingly still. The sun was shining high in the sky, but a cold and eerie winf swept through the town. A ship was sailing into port, and Thadius felt very uneays about it. When the ship docked, a pirate crew came onto the island. They proclaimed that they were know as the most feared pirate crew in the East Blue. They immediately began to cause a ruckus in the town. Thadius tried to fight them, but it was obvious that they were far too strong to defeat. The pirates mercilessly burnt down the enitre village, killing everyones family in the process. Thadius once again tried to fight, but the Captains second in command easily batted him away. The pirates set a dog on him, and the animal tore three large scars down his face. the pirates called it a reminder to never mess with them again. As thadius faded from cosciousness, the last thing he saw was his girlfriend crucified . A memento to the pirates brutality.

When thadius awoke, the pain from the scars had faded, and the bleeding had stopped. Thadius immediately set to work on taking kitty down off of the cross, and giving her and his family a proper burial. he got together a small ship, and began to set out to find the men responsible for this horrific devestation. In the many years he spent sailing, he met many an intersting person. The man he admired most was Martin Liu. The man was an explorer, and a martial artist. he taught Thadius everything he knew, both about fighting and about exploring. Unfortunately, Thadius grew to have an undying awkwardness around girls. Everytime he tried to get close a girl, he only imagined his girlfirend, lying dead on the cross. The pain in his heart far outweighed the need to settle down, and he blazed trails on the east Blue. Thadius's love of fighting brought him much unwanted attention. He picked fights with marines, unlawful pirates, and anybody who he felt was unjust. This garnered him a high bounty, and Thadius still runs from the marines to this day. Above all, he holds on to the hope that he'll find the men responsible, and that will be a fight worth having.


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Skills: Thadius has the ability to preform some martial arts, as his years on the sea and his years of adventuring have exposed a plethora of interesting people to talk to, and learn from. He is very strong, from his years of working on the island. Thadius lacks the ability to feel any pain in his bones, as a result of his devil fruit ability. Thadius can also regrow his bones, as they disintegrate when they hit something. Unfortunately, Thadius gets drunk very easily. When drunk, he is filled with rage and sorrow, because he is reliving the pain of seeing the trauma. Thanks to his rage, Thadius will attack anything he feels is attacking him or something he loves. He becomes increasingly reckless, and increasingly strong.


[b]Combat Techniques:

Bone bone sword: Thadius removes the bone from his forearm, and uses it as a sword.

Bone bone knuckles: Thadius makes the bones on his knuckles protrude slightly, to increase the punching power that he has.

Bone bone armor: Thadius creates armor out of the bones on his chest, head, neck, arms, legs, and back. This increases the amount of defense that he has, and only restricts a little of his movement capability.

Bone bone shot: Thadius shoots the bones out of his fingers, and they act like bullets.

[b]Inventory:
He travels light, with some basic survival provisions. He never carries too much money on him, but he carries his wallet beveause it has a picture of his family in it.
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Devil Fruit: The bone bone fruit.
Class: Logia
Powers: The fruit gives the user the ability to manipulate the bones in their body. They can use these bones as anything, from weapons to splints. The user can regrow their bones, as the bones are very fragile. The user does not feel any pain related to their bones either, but the bone can still be broken. As long as the bone is broken INSIDE the body, it will take time to fix it.

RP Sample: This is not optional. Look below for the examples to use.

It had already been a long day, and Thadius was incredibly tired. He was looking forward to sitting down in a familiar restaurant, and enjoying a nice meal with a few friends. The sun was high in the sky, and it was an incredibly hot day. Not something new to this island. Thadius had been here for all of two months, and still wasn't used to the heat yet. Suddenly, a girl was in front of him. Thadius had never seen this person before, and that was sending up red flags in his head. She blushed as he met her eyes, and said,

"Hi.", in a very bashful voice.

She was pretty, with long blond hair, and beautiful blue eyes.

"Hello.", replied Thadius, even though he just wanted to get out of here.

He was very awkward around girls, and he didn't like to spend anymore time than he had to around them alone. He attempted to push past her, but she wouldn't have any of that. She stepped to the side with him, and blocked him with her body. She was very red faced at this point in time, and she said,

"I've seen you around, and i decided to try and talk to you about having dinner with me."

Thadius didn't know what to do, so he ran around her, and went towards his home. He felt bad, but this is what had to happen. There was only one girl that he loved, and she had been gone for a long time.
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PostSubject: Re: Tadius M. Thatchett character sheet   Tadius M. Thatchett character sheet EmptyWed Nov 13, 2013 7:41 pm

Hello Jjax, welcome to the site ^.^ Feel free to join us in the chat box anytime. 

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Crew: He used to be a part of the Black Hearts crew.
What do you mean by this? If it has any relations to the Heart Pirates in the show, it won't be approved


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 220 pounds
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Lean, but toned muscle.
So he's really heavy, yet lean? 220 pounds is rather heavy for a "lean" man 

-So he's a hopeless romantic, yet lost the love of his life and lashes out because of this? In what world does this make sense.....Or am I just crazy?

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Thadius eventually found the animal, and scared it off.
What kind of animal was it? How did he scare it off?

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With orders from his captain, he strode onto the island, and found the place where Thadius lived.
Um, why would pirates pick him out of the crowd to ruin his life? Not all pirates are like that. I mean, I'd understand if they destroyed the whole town, killing his family in the process, but just choosing him doesn't make any sense, even for pirates

-There's nothing in his history about why is bounty is so high, why he knows any of his combat skills, or the martial arts. The history just ends, there's no explanation of where he went, how he got a boat, where he learned anything 

-The parts in the skills section about getting drunk and raging should be in the personality, it's not a skill to get drunk and upset about things. The quote below should be in the personality
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Unfortunately, Thadius gets drunk very easily. When drunk, he is filled with rage and sorrow, because he is reliving the pain of seeing the trauma. Thanks to his rage, Thadius will attack anything he feels is attacking him or something he loves. He becomes increasingly reckless, and increasingly strong.
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Bone bone shot: Thadius shoots the bones out of his fingers, and they act like bullets.
Uhhh how does he get them back? Doesn't make any sense, especially with this Devil's Fruit 

-This character cannot be approved until his Devil's Fruit is. Please make an app for it |HERE| Stick to the creation template, and look at approved apps for help. 
     -Use the creation template to make the Devil's Fruit app

-You're missing something at the bottom of your page, please read the rules. DO NOT skim them 

I would like to state that your RP sample shows me you have great potential, just break it into the correct paragraphs, otherwise it can make it hard to read. Such as going to the next paragraph when someone speaks

There are a few grammatical errors here and there that make it difficult to understand, I will let these slide, but I hope you won't let them stay in your future threads

You have great potential here! Interesting character.

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PostSubject: Re: Tadius M. Thatchett character sheet   Tadius M. Thatchett character sheet EmptyThu Nov 14, 2013 5:14 pm

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He ate the fruit in one bite, 
No mention of the horrible taste? XD

-I don't think picking fights leads to such a high bounty. Please make it more reasonable, 100,000,000 for just that isn't really logical. It'd probably be more around 60-75,000. Million is just far too much for picking fights 

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Unfortunately, Thadius gets drunk very easily. When drunk, he is filled with rage and sorrow, because he is reliving the pain of seeing the trauma. Thanks to his rage, Thadius will attack anything he feels is attacking him or something he loves. He becomes increasingly reckless, and increasingly strong.
This is still in the Skills section as well as the personality, it needn't be in both

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Bone bone shot: Thadius shoots the bones out of his fingers, and they act like bullets.
I'm afraid this really doesn't make any sense in this situation, bones aren't like bullets at all, and even with this Devil's Fruit ability, I don't think it'd be possible. 

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Class: Logia
 This type of ability would be a Paramecia, it is not a natural element. 

-Also, I notice it says he's a pirate. But he doesn't have a crow, nor is there anything in the history of this "unnamed crew" that he once belonged to. 

Keep trying, this app is almost ready for approval!

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